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［原创］七律.受命提拙笔

2009-06-15 23:59:30| 分类：【诗风词韵】 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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不看不知道，一看吓一跳！今天上得贵州渔人部落，见钓友临渊羡鱼发帖《出片求贤（慕名点将，小炒名人）》中竟有梧叶名字，让俺以一朵花的图片写七律一首，吃惊之余，觉得真是有点赶鸭子上架的味道。唉！临渊羡鱼出偏题，山昏水晕人也急。却之不恭，为之太难，谁让他是俺领导呢？梧叶还得硬着头皮提拙笔，见笑了！

七律.受命提拙笔

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一朵鲜花正向阳，

临渊点将意惶惶。

心舒黄蕊扬娇面，

人笨弯眉想烂肠。

吾岂名人君错点，

尔为才子自堪当。

羡鱼快快钓鱼去，

梧叶偷偷躲一旁。

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